Can you make my paper stronger and fix my citations and in text

Can you make my paper stronger and fix my citations and in text.

I have prepared my final essay, I need it to be stronger than what it already is. The paper is on the right track and I just need a bit more help. I will also attach what my teacher corrections he wants to be done. Please start with that and go from there. This paper should not be more than 5-6 paragraph long. That is including the intro, body , and conclusion. No more than 3-4 references and please fix my citations. 

Here is the corrections the teacher wants to be made. 

Almost there with the citations, Desi. Keep in mind that the last section is the References section not Citations, and that the source citations there should be in alphabetical order. Can you check where that MBA source should go and whether it is missing information (publication year?)? Please also check your in text citations. Use author’s last name and publication year, as in 
According to Smith (2003)…. 
….(Smith, 2003).  

Can you make my paper stronger and fix my citations and in text

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