Rough draft updated into a final draft

I have uploaded my rough draft please turn it into a final draft by making changes. make it more descriptive that the only feedback i received from my professor. the text book are uploaded as well. the original post is below, stay within these guidelines and please turn in assignment on time

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For this assignment, you will develop an original piece of writing that employs the elements of nonfiction described in Chapter 3 of the Starkey text and Chapters 3–6 and 8 of the Sellers text. You must pay attention to telling the absolute truth through real-life experience, real characters, real dialog, and real tension within the required 500–750-word range. Submit in an MS Word document file to the provided submission link. Additionally, you must paste your full draft into an thread in Discussion Board Forum 6.